其中有几句是抄歌词的，假如修改要把押韵的最后单词都改掉，这种就不要改了。
Tears and Rain
Sometimes, I'd choose darkness from cold,
How I wish, I could surrender my soul.
Sometimes, I'd stand in a silent place,
Screaming, at the top of my voice.
Is it my tears,
or it's just the rain.
Washing away my fears,
Putting out my flame.

Sometimes, I'd scream out loud to release my anger.
How I wish, I could be as small as the tip of my finger.
Sometimes, I tried to forget the days,
Days which filled with lies but no faiths.
Without caring what about the water says.
Is it my tears,
or it's just the rain.
Washing away my fears,
Crashing down my pain.

Sometimes, I'd tell what's real and what's fake,
How I wish, I'd not once again make the same mistake.
Sometimes, I'd hide in my bed and cry,
Silently, they heard nothing but a sigh.
And now, can you see the truth through their lie?
Is it my tears,
or it's just the rain.
Washing away my fears,
Filling my soul's bay.

Sometimes, I'd wish I could run wild.
How I wish, I'd run out of my mind.
Then I'd be really relieved.
That'd be wise to be free.
Now there's only water I breathe.
Is it my tears,
or its just the rain.
Washing away my fears,
Driving me insane.

Sometimes, I tried to forget the days干嘛用过去时，用try就好了；Without caring what about the water says. 应该是Without caring about what the water says吧。

最后一段的韵压得不是很好，虽然元音是相同的，但后面的辅音发音太重，甚至出现两个辅音，会影响音韵。可否改成：
Sometimes, I'd wish to fall out of line.
How I wish, I'd run out of my mind.
Then I'd get true relief,
With freedom being my belief.
Now I feel water rolling down my cheek.