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写关于你对唐山大地震中拯救被掩埋在废墟下的人的感谢,多重新建造唐山的工作人员的感谢.最后感谢来听你演讲的人.

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I would like to express my thanks to …who …
It seemed as if …
It was terrible when …
Here,I wish to express my thanks for the great efforts…

英语演讲稿,小女子我已经很用心的去写了，可是自己写的实在太惨不忍睹了，老师非说我形象好，一定要我代表班级上去演讲，哪位高手愿意帮帮我呢？
分可以加，请不要在网上随便找个翻译器胡我，虽然 小女子英语不是很好，但基本的语法错误还是可以看出来的，谢谢了

I would like to express my thanks to those who saved the person buried in the ruins in the Tangshan earth quake. It seemed as if the end of the world was coming. It was terrible when the earth quake broke out, the whole Tangshan city was disappeared from the earth.Here I wish to express my thanks for the great efforts made by the people who took part in rebuilding the new Tangshan. With everyone's help and hard work,Tangshan is a beautiful city again, people are enjoy their happy lives. At last,thank you very much for listening to my speech.

感谢那些在唐山大地震中拯救被掩埋在废墟下的人。那一天似乎世界末日到了，地震发生时太可怕了，整个唐山似乎从地球上消失了。非常那些参与重建唐山的人.在人们的帮助与努力下，唐山又成为了一个美丽的城市，人民的生活也很幸福，最后，非常感谢来听我演讲的人。