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问题: 麻烦各位好心人帮我修改下我篇学习心得!谢谢!

When I decieded to study English in the evening school,I have had a sence of responsibility of it . Why do i come here to learn english? It is because I want to talk with foreigners and find a good job ,what's more,I want to go abroad .On the whole ,i'm crazy about English,therefore I have a lot of motivation to learn English.
I know I can not go to conventional classes as I did in the middle school.I have few spare time to study,so that it demands a high degree of commitment and self-discipline from me. I must make use of my strengths to overcome my weaknesses,thought learning English Study Guide, there are some methods can help me to study successfully.
Firstly,Focus on listening.we can train our hearing on tapes,radio,TV and so on,make use of diffrent kinds of leaning resources, you will make progress in hearing and pronunciation.The more English you listen,the more you will understand.
Secondly,Focus on reading.I understand what I should read and how to read. We can not only read our textbook,we should read a wide range of texts in English about a wide range of subjects. Because there are many things which we can not learn in the textbook. It is better for us to read English frequently.The more the better. Otherwise, you will never speak one mouth of fluent English. In order to improve your reading skills,you must read very often,read widely and read anything.
Thirdly,Focus on writing. Writing is my favorite.Successful writing always keeps the reader interested,the best writing nearly always gives its message in the siuplest and clearest way possible,the golden rule here is to keep it simple,use short sentances in pereference to long.If you want to improve your writing,you should write a lot and develop a good habit.
Fourthly,Focus on speaking.Speaking is the skill that is hardest to practise if you are studing alone. If you can not find someone who can speak english,it's hard for you to improve your english.The environment is very important,it determines on your purpose that you learn foreign language. In order to improve our ability to speak with confidence,we must read aloud and talk to someone else,if you keep to your wolk schedules ,you will be successful assuredly.
The more you use the language,the easier it becomes until you forget about the difficulties and just talk or write or listen or read whthout worrying about it. In the end,thought reading the Study Guide, I learnt a lot,it makes me understand the way to study well,I hope my ideal will be come true quilkly, I will believe in myself, I'm never too old to learn, Ican do it!!


补充:请问"学习心得"的英语怎么说?我的标题应该怎样?谢谢!

解答:

few spare time---- little spare time
focus on listening--- Focusing on....
some method can---- some method that.....
read very often..... read 只要一个够了连续几个副词用顿号。
my ideal will be come...---will come
believe in....----believe myself ( believe in 是信仰)

我认为语法上没什么大错。中式英语味道太浓。应该多用介词、介词短语,被动语态。 这是英语和汉语的最大不同。