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It made me more surprised when I got thought the house which is full of things about astronomy. There was an exhibition hall in the first floor and a deal of introduction about astronomy in it,too. And second floor, which was about all kinds of telescope, any other machine and a lot of synopsis about many star was very interesting,too.
解答:
总的不错了,简单改一下:
It made me more surprised when I got through the house which was full of things about astronomy.There was an exhibition hall on the first floor with a great deal of introduction about astronomy .And on second floor, there were almost all kinds of telescope,some other machines,and a lot of brief about very interesting stars .
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