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When you write a description of a person:
.Give some general information about the person
(eg:when/where he/she was bron,education,job)
.Use a variety of adjectives to describe the person's personality.Don't forget to justify what you write.
.Make a general comment about the person,if you like


----------------------------------------------His name is Antony, we met in a theme park. he is come from LosAngels of united states, he was born in Mar 25,1988.now he is a freshman of Harvard university. he is really a good guy, study great in his subject, and he likes baseball so much, but he likes helping people more than baseball, and he love kids, everyone loves him,i think he will have a brilliant future.

i hope it will help you a little bit.

解答:

His name is Antony, we met in a theme park. he is from Los Angels of united states, he was born in Mar 25,1988.now he is a freshman of Harvard university. he is really a good guy, very good in his subject, and he likes baseball so much, but he likes helping people more than baseball, and he loves kids, everyone loves him,too. i think he will have a brilliant future.

i hope it will help you a little bit.

OK?