I get this advertisement from website and think that I am competently
to do this job, Now I am a stage 2 student at William Angliss Institute,
majoring in commercial cookery.

Firstly, I have enough work experience about food business; I worked in a
Chinese restaurant 3 months, and my major duty was cleaning dishes and
floor, sometimes, assisted my chef to cook. Also, I have worked in a western style pastry factory since May 2008. But because I am majoring in cookery, not patisserie, so I have to change the job and get work experience.

Secondly, I work hard, honestly, and never be late when working or
studying. Because I like cooking, so I am willing to learn anything
about cooking, and try my best. If you employ me, you will find that!

Lastly, on this stage, work experience is most important for me, so I don’
t care how much money I could earn, even the minimum wage can be
accepted, such as more than $8 an hour.

Please call me at 44301191 or send email; would be very happy with
some of the details on your conversation. Thanks!

THIS IS TO CORRECT GRAMMAR MISTAKES ONLY.
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I （get）GOT this advertisement from website and think that I am competent(ly)
(to do)FOR this job, Now THAT I am a stage 2 student at William Angliss Institute,
majoring in commercial cookery.

Firstly, I have enough work experience about food business; I HAD worked in a
Chinese restaurant FOR 3 months, and my major duty was (cleaning)TO CLEAN/WASH dishes and
floor, sometimes, (assisted)TO ASSIST (my)THE chef (to cook)IN COOKING. Also, I have (worked)BEEN WORKING in a western style pastry factory since May 2008. But because I am majoring in cookery, not patisserie, so I have to change the job (and)TO get work experience.

Secondly, I (work hard, honestly,)AM A HARDWORKING AND HONEST PERSON, and HAVE never beEN late (when)FOR working or
studying. Because I like cooking, (so) I am willing to learn anything
about cooking, and try my best. If you employ me, you will find that OUT!

Lastly, on this stage, work experience is THE most important THING for me, so I don’
t care how much money I could (earn)MAKE, (even the) minimum wage (can be
accepted,), such as more than $8 an hour , IS ACCEPTABLE.

Please call me at 44301191 or (send)GIVE ME AN email REPLY; would be very happy TO SHARE with YOU
(some of the)MORE details on (your)THE conversation. Thanks!