MR XXX:
您好!
我是这个学期选修了您<<软件过程改进与管理>>(Software process improvement and management )的学生XXX. 我是一名大四的学生, 由于这个学期已是我大学最后一个学期, 整个学期都在忙于找工作,做毕业设计,所以在这次的期末考试中,准备得不够充分而发挥不好, 但现在我还差1分的学分就可以达到毕业要求了, 这门科目的学分对我很重要, 我现在很担心,我很抱歉但我还是希望老师能让我PASS这一科,谢谢!
此致
祝福
您的学生:XXX
XX. XX. XXXX



看到中文意思大家也知道我要表达什么了,求英文高手翻译一下,我的英语水平比较烂不知道怎么翻译比较得体,这个老师是一位外教老师
谢谢!!

Dear Mr. XXX

How are you?

My name is XXX, student no. xxxxxxx. I have enrolled in your course “Software process improvement and management” this semester. I am writing to you in regards to my grade in your course. I am in my final year before graduation. I have been focusing on job seeking and my graduation design project this entire semester, as a result, I performed badly in the final exam in your course due to insufficient preparation.

Now I am lack of one extra credit to be qualified for graduation, hence my final mark in your course is crucial to me. This situation has led to significant negative impact on my school life. I truly hope that you may reconsider my grade in your course. It will be greatly appreciate if you considering to pass me. Thank you for your time and warmhearted help.

Yours faithfully

XXXX

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