In the United States , New Year's Eve is major holiday . (1)
For most of the past 100 year , the "ball dropping" in Times (2)
Square in New York City was braodcast alive to all of (3)
America .It is a major part of the New York celebration . (4)
The 1070-pound ,6-foot crystal ball placing high above (5)
Times Square is lowered ,starting at 23:59:00 and reach (6)
the bottlom of it's tower at the stroke of midnight(00:00:00).（7)
Tt is sometimes called for "the big apple "like the (8)
city itself .The song Auld Land Syne had become (9)
a popular song to sing at midnight in New Year's Eve . (10)

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In the United States , New Year's Eve is major holiday . (1)
For most of the past 100 year , the "ball dropping" in Times (2)
Square in New York City was braodcast alive to all of (3)
America .It is a major part of the New York celebration . (4)
The 1070-pound ,6-foot crystal ball placing high above (5)
Times Square is lowered ,starting at 23:59:00 and reach (6)
the bottlom of it's tower at the stroke of midnight(00:00:00).（7)
Tt is sometimes called for "the big apple "like the (8)
city itself .The song Auld Land Syne had become (9)
a popular song to sing at midnight in New Year's Eve . (10)
第一题：holiday是可数名词，但后面没加s说明要它的单数形式，前面要加上a.
第二题：100是复数，后面要用s
第三题：没有错。to 也是对的，楼上的说法不对啊。
第四题：celebration后加s ,表示这是很多庆祝活动中的一个。
第五题：ball是单数，后又是一个动词的ing形式，要在后加is.
第六题：前后一致性，用and连接的，所以所以和starting时态一致，用reaching.
第七题：你是不是打错了？应该是its，它的。还有at midnight,固定搭配。
第八题：去掉for,被动，不是为了的意思。
第九题：文章讲的是客观事实，不是过去的事，用has
第十题：是at ...eve，这是一个固定搭配。
你要有什么问题在给我说，我通天在线。