我爱英语，想学好英语。可我现在在普通学校，那里的英语教学水平不能满足我的需求。所以我来到这里，希望能够得到更好的教育，能够深造，希望您们能让我的梦想实现。

I like English very much and would like to be proficient in the language. However, it is my observation that the standard of English at my current school does not serve my needs. This is why I have come here with the desire to have access to better training in English at a higher level. I will work very hard here and would hope my dream could be materialised.

英语的处理手法与你的中文原文有点区别。