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问题: 帮我检查一下语法错误

2006/01—2008/05: China Sonangol International Holding Ltd. Purchase Manager

CSI Mainly focus on the exportion to North Korea and Angora. I am incharge of purchasing various materials for exportion and the total amount achieved US$ 10M two years. It is mainly from 2 projects-North Korea Kingkong Square and 3 Angora facilities.

Detail is as following:

1. collect marketing information, organize bidding, evaluate suppliers’quality and cost, making contract, negotiating the item of agreement, sign suply contract.

2. handle all process of exportion

3. get market informaion about all supplement and update supplier list on time.

4. keep good relationship with main suppliers.

解答:

I am incharge 出现了2个谓语,应该把am去掉,Detail is as following应该改成Details are as following,因为你不只列举一点,所以要用复数,第一点中的making,negociating应该把ing去掉,因为你前面和后面都没用ing,要保持一致,marketing直接用market好了.