Do you love life ? then do not squamder time for that is the stuff life is made of .------------ben jarmin franklin.

The moment the 28th Olympic Games were declared open the whole world chhred . so the man always sits on the sofa watching TV all day . on the desk ,I can find much medicine.As a saying says,our life depends on sport .Ithink the man need more exercises.,not watch Tv all day .虽然28界奥运会是5000年来第一次在中国举行。 it is very important to many China people ,But can not always sit on the sofa watching TV all day .it is not good to my healthy .我想这个男人应常常站起来活动活动。这样他可以摆脱疾病的折磨。He will lead a better and healthier life 。同时他还能天天观看奥林匹克运动会会为中国健儿加油！！！！！！！！

有些我不会翻译 请帮我翻译一下？？？？？还有帮我修改一下这个短文。。。

不要为了表达你不能用英语表达的东西查字典用了很多你不熟悉用法的单词，会让人看不懂，尽量用最简单的语句表述，用英文思维去思考作文而不是把脑子中成形的中文作文翻译成英语。

Do you love life ? then do not squamder time for that is the stuff life is made of .------------ben jarmin franklin. （这句你摘抄的么？我不敢帮你乱动，反正有的单词莫名其妙，你自己最好再翻翻资料求证一下）

People all over the world cheered the moment the 28th Olympic Games were declared to open. Most people watched TVs to know how many gold medals China has won.But there are some people who watched TVs with bottles of medicine on the tables. As a saying says,our life depends on sport.I think they need more exercises instead of watching TVs all day.Though the 28th Olympic Games held in China was a great event and it is also very important for us Chinese people,we can not always sit in sofas watching TVs.It dose no good to our health.I think we need more exercise to help us stay healthy.Celebrate the Olympics in this way enables us to lead a better and healthier life.

帮你改了挺多，主旨没有变，但是一个人看电视桌上有药这句话实在很奇怪，你再斟酌一下。大问题应该是没有了。