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Lisa Kelly’s beautiful voice
In the other day, I heard some English songs that Kelly sung. I thought that the voice is the most beautiful in the world. I feel I haven’t been hearing such beautiful voice for very a long time. Her voice is so clear and exquisite just like crystal or a rivulet flowing from a High Mountain.
Such voice makes me enjoy it very much. And I wonder why the foreign singers' level and skills are much better than Chinese. Aren’t there any musical creators in China? It’s unbelievable. At that moment, I just want to make our folk music more fantastic than foreign music……

解答:

1. I heard some English songs sung by Kelly the other
day。
2.was most beautiful
3. felt hadn't heard
4.was so
5.flow down a high mountain
6.made me
7.now I wonder

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