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1. "Taiwan Tour"
Change the status quo of cross-strait tourism
From July 4 date, a "Taiwan Tour" of an upsurge in cross-strait rising. This is the "Taiwan Tour" extraordinary business opportunities in the root.
In mainland China, in the first half due to snowstorms, earthquakes caused by the tourism industry in a depressed state, as Taiwan is to start the tour are gone. As Taiwan's first tour group go smoothly, the recent application to travel agencies and advisory steady stream of guests. Taiwan is expected to open the travel agencies can generate an annual turnover of nearly billion.
In Taiwan, 680 mainland tourists were the first group to arrive for Taiwan businessmen to weave a beautiful paintings of scenes of consumption: visitors from the mainland, the renminbi has come. According to Taiwan's tourism industry are preliminary estimates, excluding airfare, the average first group of tourists in Taiwan for sightseeing, accommodation, shopping, at least 60,000 yuan to spend NT, so that Taiwan can gain a NT 40,000,000, or about RMB 9,300,000 yuan into .
I have the honor of being the first mainland tourists to Taiwan Mission in Shanghai in a mission to witness the cross-strait tourism to seek business opportunities in the journey.
The spending power of mainland tourists amazing
July 13, Shanghai travel to Taiwan by the end of the first regiment of the 10-day trip, Fan Hu at the time of as much as Baggage, so that Taiwan's Taoyuan airport staff Zashe. Pineapple crisp, the sun cake, Floss, dried fish floss, high mountain tea, tobacco, glass crafts, brand-name Lin Bao, cosmetics, everything a variety of goods, luggage is not big enough, they buy carton packaging. Consignment procedures in the run, almost every tourist's luggage are overweight. Finally, the airline passenger baggage to the provisional weight from 20 kg to 30 kg of.
China's amazing tourists spending power, also encouraged Taiwan businessmen. The Story of the Buddha in Taitung Ami cake shop, Shanghai group first stop shopping, only a short period of half an hour, 100 visitors in Shanghai has "buy" more than 60,000 yuan NT goods. Huang said that the owner of Xuan, Shanghai tourists in the store's per capita consumption of Taiwan visitors per cent more than the amount of 50%.
It is reported that Taiwan's tourism industry for a long time been very low. In addition to a year less than 100 million Japanese tourists, from Hong Kong and Singapore, a small amount of foreign visitors each year come here on vacation are very scarce. Taiwan's average hotel room costs only 105 dollars, far below the standard room rate in Hong Kong.
In this case, mainland residents to Taiwan's tourism and opening up of Taiwan businessmen in particular, tour operators, as good as a great business opportunities. There are cards for data from 1997, nearly 1 million mainland visitors to Hong Kong, mainland visitors brought about by the Hong Kong Tourism revenue has accounted for the total tourism revenue of more than one-third. It is understood that Taiwan for mainland tour operators are eligible to receive visitors. Shanghai's first mission to take the Phoenix travel agency in Taiwan is a public company, Zhang Jinming, chairman of the company's management team led by the 10-day trip with the group accompanying him, even at the cost of the tour fare subsidies so as to get word-of-mouth tourists; hotel accommodation along the way, Restaurant meals are also welcome to put up banners in honor dedicated the first group of tourists, want to seize this rare opportunity.
Taiwan outbound tour operators believe that with the mainland visitors arrived in Taiwan in a depressed state's tourism economy will soon be reversed. They estimated that in accordance with a daily average of 3000 to limit terms of Taiwan's mainland over the past year, there were 1,095,000, the island of Taiwan to receive next year the total number of tourists is expected to increase by 20%, tourism revenue growth rate will reach 12%. Taiwan's overall hotel occupancy rate was 22%, hotel room rate rose 15%. In addition, if mainland tourists in Taiwan per person consumption of 5,000 yuan, Taiwan's annual tourism income will be 5.5 billion New Taiwan

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错误太多了,完全是chinglish .读的头晕,