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本人接受过较为全面的机械基础教育.工作中也受过化工操作的专业训练,熟悉CAD和PRO/E软件,对工作认真负责、积极主动、善于团队合作,是一个敢于迎接新挑战的人。
I received more comprehensive machinery of basic education. At work ,has also received professional training in chemical operations, are familiar with CAD and PRO/E software, work on a serious and responsible, proactive and good team work .I am a man daring to meet new challenges.
(这是小弟翻译的简历,英语水平有限,望各位大哥给与纠正)

解答:

I have received comparatively comprehensive fundamental mechanical education and also received processional training in chemical operations while working. I am familiar with CAD and PRO/E software. I am responsible, pro-active and able to work well in teams. I like to meet new challenges.

你这应该是自我介绍,最好不要用dare to,会给别人一个喜欢冒险的感觉,反而不好。我在算是重新给你写的,你的好像是机器/软件翻译的。你看看。