the advantage and disadvantage of calling
recently,the calling id recieved by more and more pepole.why?which advantage and disadvantage do calling have?
it's certainly that calling have many advantage that modern peple need than others. the rthyem of morden life faster and faster,so peple need communicate informatin in time.the calling is covineit,prompt,and so on. in short,the great advantage of calling is that it is fit to modern peple's taste.certainly it still have some failness.
many peple complain that always can not reserch somebody by calling,and it is very cofused.but this
could not prevent calling form development.
i believe,following the technical developement calling will taking place of other transport become more and more important in peple's life.

好处就不说了，一下是几点问题，详细的解释已标出


此文中有很多品错的单词，每局开头应大写。
词汇可以更丰富一些
作者并没有详细的举出手机好处级坏处，段落指给除了中心句，但没有细讲。
对英语常用短语的搭配了解不够。
整篇文章像是用中文的语法和英文的单词拼成的



the advantage and disadvantage of calling(1)
recently,the calling id recieved(2) by more and more pepole.why?which(3) advantage and disadvantage do calling have?
it's certainly(4) that calling have(5) many advantage(6) that modern peple need than others(7). the rthyem（8） of morden life(9) faster and faster,so peple（10） need (11)communicate informatin(12) in time（13）.the calling is covineit(14),prompt,and so on. in short,the great advantage of calling is that it is fit to(15) modern peple's taste.certainly it still have some failness(16).
many peple complain that always(17) can not reserch(18) somebody by calling,and it is very cofused(19).but this
could not prevent calling form(20) development.
i believe,following the technical developement(21) calling will taking place of(22) other transport(23) become more and more important in peple's life.

(1)你指的是手机吗？（cell phone)
(2)is received
(3) 是what，不是which
(4)certain
(5)has
(6)advantages
(7)改为the people of today need, "than others"指得时谁？
（8）rhythm
(9)is faster, 原句没有动词
（10）people
(11)need to
(12)或者是communicate with other people 或者是 exchange information, 没有"communicate information" 这种用法
（13是on time, 不是 in time
(14) convenient
(15)应是it fits modern people's taste, 不是it is fit to
(16) failures
(17) they usually, 不是always
(18)reach
(19) confusing
(20）from
(21) improvement
(22) will take, 不是will taking, 而且， 这句话应改为will replace
(23) and become