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Name: Han Jiajun Student Number: ××××××× Specialty: CLMD

My name is Han Jiajun. I am born in this beautiful city Soochow. After three years’ study in Su zhou High School, now I come to Soochow University.

In my spare time, I like to make model ships. Therefore, I think I am a very careful and patient person. Often, I am absorbed in it and spend many hours in making it. Those model parts are very small, but I am put them in the right place. I will be very happy when the ship is finished and sets sail in the water.

My character decides my interest, and my interest reflects my character. I think I do everything carefully and patiently, and I will spare no effort to do the future lessons well.

急切需要,十分感谢。

解答:

Name: Han Jiajun Student Number: ××××××× Specialty: CLMD

My name is Han Jiajun. I 【am-→was】 born in this beautiful city Soochow. After three years’ 【study-→studying】 in Su zhou High School, I 【come to-→went into the】 Soochow University.

In my spare time, I like 【to make-→making】 model ships. Often, I am absorbed in it and 【I】spend many hours in making it. Those model parts are very small, but I 【am-→can】 put them in the right place. Therefore, I think I am a very careful and patient person. I 【will be-→am】very happy when the ship is finished and sets sail in the water.

My character decides my interest, and my interest reflects my character. I think I 【can】do everything carefully and patiently, and I will spare no effort to do the future lessons well.