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during the 3 year of the high school i thought i was a goood student and i tired my best to study well however in the summer of 2008 i got nothing but a failure after the failure i found a man full of sorrow in the mirror

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During the 3 【years'】 of the high school, I thought i was a goood student and i 【tried】 my best to study well.However,in the summer of 2008, i got nothing but 【failure】. After the failure ,i 【saw 】a man 【with】 sorrow in the mirror