问题: 请帮忙看一下简历的英译是否有错
Personal Resume
Name
Gender
M
Native place
National
Mongolian
Date of birth
Political landscape
Members
Height
176CM State of health
Good
Education
Undergraduate(double degree) Their branches
Traffic and Motor School
Professional majors Vehicle Engineering
The level of computer
State secondary
The second
professional English
English proficiency
4
Driving C1 driver's license School office Entrepreneurs Association
Tel +86-015524384276 QQ 475483103
E-mail zhangyuhappy365@126.com
Graduated
from colleges Shenyang Ligong University School
Address Shenyang Hunnan New Road Nanping 6 Shenyang Ligong University School of Traffic and Motor Vehicle Engineering class of 2005
Post Code: 110168
Social practice Shenyang Jinbei Automotive Gear Factory
Understanding of the automotive transmission, the gear shaft of the manufacturing process and technology。
Shenyang Jinbei Automotive Co., Ltd. Die
Understanding of the car body fender, doors, hood, and so the whole process of production.
Brilliance Jinbei R & D center
To understand the process of development of car and the performance of the inspection process
To understand the process of development of car and the performance of the inspection process
Understanding of the car's drive shaft manufacturing, assembly and the combination of dynamic balance testing process
Shenyang Zhongshunqiju Co., Ltd.
Understanding of the automotive assembly, painting, vehicle assembly line and test the new car the entire process
College training workshop
Understanding of the non-contact three-dimensional coordinates the work of the scanner, the whole process
Overall quality
English proficiency:
Through four levels of the National English Test. Solid, strong listening, speaking, reading and writing ability, independent reading and translation of English literature in general, with foreign staff to carry out successfully the language of communication.
computer:
In 2008, through the National Computer secondary examination (C language).
Familiar with Windows, can be trained to use Word, PowerPoint, Auto CAD, CATIA software, MSC Adams to master simulation analysis and Ansys, MSC.Patran, Dytran finite element analysis, computer and can be software and hardware for skilled installation and maintenance!
other:
In October 2007 won the C1 car driver's license.
School experience
2006.9 to 2007.9, as Shenyang University of Science and Technology Entrepreneurs Association, organized the visit, including Coca-Cola, Rich experienced cash flow of the game, NLP, as well as a variety of large-scale business training course.2007.9, led by community members to promote the practice of English magazine, greatly increased the membership interest in the business!
2006.9 to date, Shenyang in San Haojie computer hardware and software of the assembly and maintenance, and has made few thousand dollars!
2006.5, took part in the "VOLVO" large-scale construction machinery and technical training will be!
2007.12, attended the "ace" of the three northeastern provinces of the annual sum of the General Assembly!
Professional courses
Motor theory, and the structure Principles of internal combustion engines, automotive emission control and energy saving, auto test tractor, car design, car manufacturing technology, metal technology, materials, mechanical engineering, mechanical design chassis construction, automotive diagnostic and testing technology, automotive electronics technology , The principle of single-chip, automotive electrical and electronic equipment, mechanical principles, theoretical mechanics, material mechanics, mechanical CAD / CAM technology, descriptive geometry and mechanical drawing, engineering drawing, engineering English Automotive
Second degree
Introduction to English-speaking community, the high-level English skills in reading, grammar, spoken English, listen to English, English writing, listening High, the Anglo-American literary history, theory and practice of translation, the English High
Self-evaluation
I cheerful personality, stable, others warm and sincere. A serious and responsible work, take the initiative to hard-working. Strong organizational capabilities, hands-on practical ability and team spirit groups, in the school during the respect for teachers and students of unity has been well received. Learning study hard, meticulous, professional knowledge and proficiency, there is a strong learning ability, logical sense of organization and ability to accept new things quickly, to adapt to different environments and types of jobs.
Sincere wishes for the performance of the company's success!
解答:
扫了一眼,问题一堆,先简单说说吧:
首先,简历不是personal resume,是CV,
第二,英文简历一般不会写你的籍贯,如果你非要写,也不是native place,是homeplace或者origin, native place用在更正式的地方,例如法律意义上的身份调查等。
第三,我想你大概是想说内蒙古是吧,那个是inner m...不是national。
第四,其他的我还没看,先这么多吧。后面我晚一点看完再加。
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继续:
第五,你应该把你的联系方式放前面,学历方面,要先写你有什么学科的什么学位,再具体介绍你什么时候在哪里受教育。 把学历major前面的professional去掉。你这部分描述的语法错误太多,一个个纠正的话相当于重写了,建议你自己先检查一下。
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第六,由于我实在看不明白你后面在写什么,只能跟你说,如果你的英文简历只是凑个数,贴在中文简历后面给中国人看的话,你把格式理清楚,语法错误改一改也就可以了,但是,要是你是去外企的话,建议你重写吧,至少我们公司人力资源部绝对会把这种简历当笑柄的。不想被笑,就好好写一份。记住你不是在翻译你的中文简历,你是直接写给外国人看的,他才不关心你是不是党员或者团员,更不在乎你有多高,你是不是健康。。。。
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