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　　我是杨一鸣的爸爸，非常感谢您对一鸣的关心和帮助，我渴望我女儿到蒙特爱立森大学读书，贵校各方面的条件都很好，而且有你们这样的热心好人帮忙，我们很放心。我从网上查询，通过航空邮寄的材料已经到达，请问大约在什么时间我们收到一鸣的正式录取通知书。这个问题对我们很重要，一旦收到通知书，我们将决定一鸣下一步主要精力的转移和努力的方向，为进入蒙特爱立森大学读书做好充分的准备。
　　再次感谢您的大力支持和帮助。

杨宝远

Dear Mr. Charlie,

I am Yang Yiming's father. First I would like to deliver my great appreciation for your kind help and care to my daughter. I want my daughter to study in Monte Elison University, beacuse the university is good in all aspects, most of all, she is able to obtain the kind assistance from good man like you, we will not worry about her anymore.

I had checked in internet, the air mail had been delivered. Then I would like to now when we will have the offical Enrollment Notice. This is very important to us because once we have the notice, we will know which aspect Yiming's attention and energy will be paied to and to help her in preparing for the new experience in Monte Elison University.

Allow me to delivery my great thanks again for your kind help and support.

Yours Sincerely,

Yang Baoyuan