My family
This is my family.There are my parents.My father is a factory worker.He name is Sun Zhong .He can spesk English very well and he can computer very well.His favorite food is chaffy dish and his favourite fruit is watermelon.He 39 years old.I love him very much.This is my mother.Her name is Han Bang qin. she is 36 years old.She's tall.She is a housewife.Her hobbies are playing badminton and running.Her favorite food is shrimp and her favorite fruit is kiwi fruit.She can cook very well.I like they very much.This is my family!
请将改好后的文章用学问打出来。再另标上哪里错了！谢谢！

My family
I love my family.my parent are my family.My father is a factory worker.He name is Sun Zhong .He speaks English very well and he using computer very well.His favorite food is chaffy dish and his favourite fruit is watermelon.He is 39 years old.I love him very much.My mother's name is Han Bang qin. she is 36 years old.She is tall.She is a housewife.Her likes playing badminton and running.Her favorite food is shrimp and her favorite fruit is kiwi.She cooks very well.I like them very much.This is my family!

This is my family,this is my family 你已经不用这样说了，因为你没有具体的图如果你有图和相片，你可以这样介绍。
There are my parents.parent已经是复数了。所以不用加S

He can spesks English and spesks 你写错了 应该是speaks。在文章不用加Can了，因为你说Speaks就很具体了。这样比较简洁。

还有你说电脑，他的电脑很好，这样需要动词 所以我帮你改了Using.

He 39 years old. 少了助动词 Be verb


Her hobbies are playing badminton and running.这里你用的语法不对。你要用hobbies 我觉得用Likes 比较好一些 不过你留也可以。


She cooks very well.I like them very much.This is my family!你不用再说Can了。还有I是主语了，你的They 不应该放这里 应该放Them