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Since my childhood, I has been dreaming of travling around the world. Among numerous tourist destinations around the world, I like Europe most, since Europe can offer my many beautiful natural scenery and it also boasts a big number of museums with a long history. Asian Countries are my second choice,for example, Japan and South Korea, becuase they are all modern countries marked with advanced technology and fast economic growth. If you ask which country is my favorite, it is, without any doubt, France, because it is such a romantic and lovable country. Of course we China is also famous for its countless natural and cultural sites. So maybe traveling around China may be my first step towards my dream. I wish my dream can come true.

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