问题: 英语作文改错
请大家为我下面的英语作文挑一下错。无论是语法上的还是意思上的。谢谢!
Environmemtal Problems
As we know, now the environment that we live in is becoming worse and worse. The sky becomes gray, the river becomes black and so on, especially we can feel that it is warmer and warmer. All these tell us that the environment is polluted.
And the reaxon I think are following: firstly,people throw the rubbish awayanywhere. And the rubbish makes the water and road dirty. Secondly, the buses and cars discharge much carbon dioxide. Thirdly, many factaries discharge industry dirty water.
If we want to prevent the environment from continually being worse,we should take some measures: firstly, I think the main cause of the environmental problems is that people don't realize the improtance of protecting environment, so the first measure we should take is to let all people know it. Secondly,we should develop the scient technology, and reduce the tail gas or use other fuel. Thirdly, we need to plant more trees, flowers and grass.
I think if we try our best, the environment will become better and better.
解答:
Environmemtal (Environmental) Problems
As we know, now the environment that we live in is becoming worse and worse. The sky becomes gray, the river becomes black and so on (and so on 要三句以上并列,此处删除), especially we can feel that it is warmer and warmer. All these tell us that the environment is(are being) polluted.
And (I think) the reaxon(reason) (I think挪到前面) are following: firstly,people throw the rubbish awayanywhere(everywhere). And the rubbish makes the water and road dirty. Secondly, the buses and cars(vehicle) discharge(emit) much carbon dioxide. Thirdly, many factaries(factories) discharge(emit) industry dirty(polluted) water.
If we want to prevent the environment from continually getting worse(polluting),we should take some measures: firstly, I think the main cause of the environmental problems is that people don't (didnt)realize the improtance(importance) of protecting environment(environment protection), so the first measure we should take is to let all people know it. Secondly,we should develop the scient (scientific)technology, and reduce the tail gas(automobile gas emission) or use other fuel(clean fuel). Thirdly, we need to plant more trees, flowers and grass.
I think if we try our best (and work together), the environment will become better and better.
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