问题: 这样说对吗
You are welcome to come to Y, Y Lai is the business of the boot for 10 years, he was x enterprise's high-end fashion stores to promote the idea of the key positions; he is the first province to launch the display of art furniture store, and I believe we can see He felt the buzz, fashion and art performance of the furniture store.
I am glad that today's guests came to the Y, please enjoy it, I wish you all a good night, thank you!
有语法错误吗？ 请指正！ 谢谢
解答:
正确简洁的说法应该如下：
welcome to Y, Y Lai act as the business boot about 10 years, it was x enterprise's high-end fashion stores to promote the idea of the key positions; and it is the first province to launch the display of furniture art store, and I believe you can see the buzz, fashion and art performance of the furniture store.
I am happy that you came to the Y, please enjoy it, I wish you all have a good night, thank you!
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