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问题: 帮我修改一下我的英文自我介绍

因为面试的时候面试官可能会问到用英语自我介绍,所以我想先准备一下

Good morning, first of all, thank you for this interview!
My name is Chen Guangwen, I will graduate from QingDao Technological University in July, 2009.
My major is Industrial Engineering, I like my major, I study the professional knowledge earnestly, therefore I have mastered the strong professional knowledge. I have attained scholarship for several times. What's more, I have never failed in my subjects.
I usually use Industrial Engineering in my daily life, I manage my time effectively, I know how to make things work efficiently, I have a very good arrangement ability, I usually have a plan for everything. From life at university, I learn how to balance study and entertainment.
I've made some foreign friends and learnt to communicate with them and understand their way to think and act. I talk with them about anything. This experience gives me much stronger confidence of communication skills. Also, they help me with my English.
I have a ability of perseverance, I have been keeping diary for 7 years, which I feel very proud.
This summer I got a good opportunity of working for FOXCONN as a trainee. In my work, I practiced my major, I also found communication, cooperation and scrupulosity are very important.
I like physical exercise, I wake up in the early morning everyday and run along the beach. In the evening, I improve biceps brachii with dumbbells. So I always feel energetic with my work.
As to my character, I cannot describe it well, but I know I am optimistic and confident. Sometimes I prefer to stay alone, reading and deep thinking. Oh, by the way, I like Murakami's books. But I am not lonely, for I like to chat with my classmates about almost everything.
I think all these experience and my responsibility, creating thinking and passion would make me quality for this job. I would like to tell you that doing Industrial Engineering is one of my lifelong goals. If I can work here, I will work very hard.
Thank you!

解答:

如果要自我介绍这篇就长了一点.
Good morning.
My name is Chen Guangwen, I am going to graduate from QingDao Technological University in July, 2009.
My major is Industrial Engineering. This summer I got a (good) opportunity to work at FOXCONN as a trainee. I practiced what I learnt from the school (my major), I also learnt how to communicate,cooperate to others and work scrupulosity . It was a very important lesson that I could not learnt from the school.
May be it sound funny, actually, I apply the idea of Industrial Engineering in my daily life, I manage my time effectively, I know how to make things work efficiently, I have a very good arrangement ability, I usually have a plan for everything. From life at university, I learn how to balance study and entertainment.

如果interview 是一个外籍的,你原文就不是很体面
I've some foreign friends. Those experience gives me much stronger confidence to communicate and work with foreign colleagues and overseas clients.

I am optimistic and confident. I like physical exercise, I run along the beach in the morning everyday. In the evening, I improve biceps brachii with dumbbells. So I always feel energetic with my work.

I believe all these experience (and my responsibility, creating thinking and passion would) make me quality for this job. I would like to tell you that (doing) Industrial Engineering is one of my lifelong goals. If I have a chance (can) to work here, I believe I will go along the job in very short time and work hardly.
Thank you for your time and the opportunity of this interview.

我尽量用你原文,文法对错不太管因为这些都是你自己的文字.
我只是尝试让原文组织更合理。