To inhance one's quanlity is necesslary to more and more college student appears in China faced keen job-hunting competition.It is hard to find ajob without special skills.The society required a high quanlity to current student.The college student in campus should use the time efficently and to obtained a vairty of base skill.
So, you will hve chances to win in a job-hunting.
I think present college student should possess some quanlities.First,a good temper is very important to current college student.As a staff in acopany,you must improve your relations with athers.Second,a substance major knowlege.Finally,team spirit is emphasized by many company.All of this have been done,finding a good job isn't diffcult.

To enhance one's quality is more and more important for Chinese college students,who are facing keen job-hunting competition. Without certain special skills, it is hard for them to find a job. The society is raising a higher standard for them. Therefor, college students should take efficient use of their college life and obtain a variety of basic skills.
Only by doing so, can you win chances for a decent job.

In my opinion, college students should possess the following merits and qualities. First,a good temper is very important to them.As a staff member, you must improve your relationship with your colleagues. Second, strong expertise on your major. Finally, you should have team spirit which is frequently emphasized by many companies. With all above being done, finding a good job becomes easy.

你的原文问题较多,根据你要表达的意思我进行了改写.但大的方向没有改动.第二段我认为你应该再展开一点,而不是只列要点就行了.对照一下我的和你的,找出不同的地方,然后思考为什么这么改,你的水平会提高的.