Hi, guys! Now I recommend myself to you as a translator and interpreter both in Russian and English. My name is Steven, and you can directly call me Victor. I am 28 years old. I have just resigned my previous (first) job for presuming my graduate study for the doctor’s degree. So I will have enough time and reasons to work as a soho-translator.
Generally speaking, my major is Russian, and I have been learning it more than 9 years and working with it more than 5 years. During this period I have translated literally up to 800,000 words, which cover IT, finances, petrochemical engineering and etc. From 2006 to 2008 I have worked as a translator-trainer in Tashkent of Uzbekistan, where I accumulated many working experiences and found my intelligence, diligence and work ethic to be exceptional.
As to my English, I have been studying it since my junior school time. When I was in university, I have passed CET-6 with excellent scores. But later because of working reasons for nearly 2 years I had left it away. And since 2007 I began to pick it up, and now I am expecting a TEM-8 level in the near future. As I have been working as English tutor for 3 years, and have translated many works from English to Russian. You could fully rely on me for your related work.
I am an active person with enthusiasm of work as well as a responsible translator for every work of mine. So you have every reason to trust me. Believe in me, you’ll get excellent work, good reputation and customer’s trust.
Thank you
p.s.: please feel free to contact me if you need any further information.

语感很好。细节有待加强

in both russian and english OR both in russian and in english
of course the first one is better

you can call me victor.
no need for "directly". at most use "just"

...just resigned from my...
need the from.

...to resume graduate studies for my doctor's degree.
i don't get why you use presume. i suppose you mean "return to"?
graduate study is not yours, the degree is.

do not use so/but/and/because and alike to begin a sentence in formal writing. only poets use them that way and grammar teachers hate poets.

...learning it for more than...working with it for...
need the for

when you say "which cover", you are treating the which as a whole, so it should be "which covers"
or simply use covering instead of which covers

IT, finances, petrochemical engineering, etc
OR IT, finances, petrochemical engineering and many others.
i suggest the second version. you should not use etc in formal writing (the same way that you should not use apostrophes other than for possessives in formal writing. some people would even avoid that.)

i worked as a... dont need the have

worked as a translator trainer is ok, but i like "worked to train translator" better.

as for my english skill OR as for english
for, not to
english is not yours. skill is.

since junior school. no need for my and time.

...i passed CET...
if you can use simple tense, don't use perfect.

moving on to the next two sentences. again, if you are using "but" and "and", you should consider combine them into a single sentence or use a different word. consider
"...with excellent scores, but later, because of working reasons, for nearly 2 years I had left it away. However, since 2007, I began to pick it up again, and now I am expecting a TEM-8 level in the near future. "
notice how i added several commas. use them alot if you want fancy sentence structures.
i used a new sentence and "however" because you are talking about a whole new period, so you want a new sentence, and for the same reason "and" isn't as good.
i also added "again" to the pick up action.

since i have been... "as" is another word that you dont want to begin a sentence with.

...as an english tutor. you are not the only tutor in existence, are you?

you should not split the reason and the reason for into two sentence.

totally is better than fully here.
rely is in no way inferior, but i like "trust" better. pure opinion here.

with the enthusiasm for work

A with B and C would imply A with (B and C). think A+BxC = A+(BxC)
this is where you use commas. they are like brackets in math.

"I am an active person with the enthusiasm for work, as well as being a responsible translator for every piece of work of mine."

note that i also added "being" for the same matter.
you need a unit for "work", hence "every piece of work"
also consider
"I am an active person with the enthusiasm for work as well as the responsibility of a translator for every piece of work of mine."
an alternative get-around solution for the logic problem, but nothing else special.

Believe in me, and you will get excellent work, good reputation and the customer's trust.
you need the and there to make the association. also, don't ruin the formality with "you'll".

that's about it. maybe i've missed a few things or maybe i was overly strict with picking out things.
in any case, you better give me more credit than a petty 15 for all those work.





(ok. don't take the last one seriously.)