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My last vacation was in China in Mar. 2007. It's nice season, not so cold, not so hot. we went to the place where name:"seven stars rock" . we took the small boat in to the cavity on the water, and someone was sing a song upon around over the head. It made the whold cavity filled up joy and mystery. and the food over there was good too, there's a bamboo rice that I'd like to recommend, It used mixed seasoning rice put into the bamboo and cooked it. It's tasty!

我想表达的是:
我的前一个假期是在2007年3月。这是一很好的季节,不热也不冷。我们去了一个叫做“七星岩”的地方玩。我们乘着小船进入洞里,有人在那里唱歌,歌声悠扬动听,飘荡在洞内的上方。使整个山洞充满欢乐和神秘。而且,那里的食物也很好。我要推荐的就是“竹筒饭”。它是由调味好的米放进竹筒烹调而成的。非常好味的!

解答:

我的前一个假期是在2007年3月。
I took my recent vacation in March of 2007.
这是一很好的季节,不热也不冷。
It was a nice season, neither very hot nor very cold.
我们去了一个叫做“七星岩”的地方玩。
We went to a view point named “QI XIN YAN”
我们乘着小船进入洞里,有人在那里唱 歌,歌声悠扬动听,飘荡在洞内的上方。
We entered in to a tunnel with a boat, where a melody was flying inside.
使整个山洞充满欢乐和神秘。
It made the tunnel even more delightful and miserable.
而且,那里的食物也很好。我要推荐的就是“竹筒饭”。它是由调味好的米放进竹筒烹调而成 的。
By the way, the food there was so good. I have to recommend the traditional food “ Bamboo rice ”. It’s a kind of rice cooked using bamboo as the container.
非常好味的!
Very cool food!