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问题: 帮我改一下小作文“An Unforgettable ......”

Write at least 60 words about the topic "An Unforgettable ......" according to the situation given.
Make sure you:
Say what the unforgettable ... was
Say who/what made you unforgettable.
Explain why you felt it unforgettable.

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I have an unforgettable book. It is very interesting. It has told a story in English. It is Green. It has a lot of pictures in it. It is color page. I like it. It is say a boy and his mother on the road. One day ……. You can feel that It is very good. The book is paid my fifty five Dolores. So I felt it unforgettable.
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解答:

An unforgettable book.

I read an unforgettable book, it was very interesting. It was written in English and it was green. It had a lot of pictures in it, the pages were coloured. I liked it a lot. The story was about a boy and his mother on the road and one day....You can see read it yourself to find out the rest. I paid fifty five Dollars for this book and it was truly unforgettable.