The most important quality of a university student
University is not only a place, where people can acquire lots of knowledge and thoughts, but also a place, where people can perfect themselves. For university students are a group of people, who are adults both physically and spiritually. They should have understood that how important good personal qualities would be to themselves, especially for their future lives. One of the most important personal qualities, in my opinion, is honesty.
Being honest, you may gain the trust of people around you during your university time; being honest, you may tackle most of your interpersonal conflicts by a heart-to-heart talk; being honest, you may find that you have no regrets at all. Actually, you needn’t intend to do anything; just be yourself, and don’t hind yourself behind a mask.
Honesty is so basic a quality for everyone, but it doesn't seem to be so easy to keep with, especially in some occasions. Take the dissertation for example, if you hadn’t paid enough attention to your term paper, you would have tried to take a risk to copy others' from internet or etc. Recently, dissertation copy has become a severe problem in universities. Many measures have been adopted in order to get rid of that dishonest behavior. In my opinion, honesty education should be listed at the first.
Those, who copy other's papers as their own may be having seen the trees rather than the forest. They would not expect the negative impacts, which dishonesty would bring them, in the future. May be they will lose many job opportunities for their dishonest records. It is far worse that one’s whole life would be affected by one foolish mistake.
As a saying goes, “Value your clothes when they were still new. Value your reputation when you were still young.” To the university students, my suggestion is that you young guys should value the quality of honesty for your own sake.

For university students are a group of people

for 当“因为”不能放在句首。

you may find that you have no regrets at all.

find 后一般不接从句 建议改成 you won't find it regretful at all.

if you hadn’t paid enough attention to your term paper, you would have tried to take a risk to copy others'
用虚拟语气是不合适的。陈述语气完全可以 if you don't pay attention.......


Many measures have been adopted in order to get rid of that dishonest behavior. 去掉 "in order " has been adopted to get ride of ....

in my opinion 最好只用一次，如果再用，建议用同义词。如 personally,in my viewpoint
honesty education should be listed at the first. at the first 是介词短语不能用来做 listed 的补语 去掉 at .


May be they will lose many job opportunities for their dishonest records.
may be 改为 maybe 全句最好改为 Maybe they will lose many job opportunities owing to their dishonest records
being honest 改成　ｔｏ　ｂｅ　ｈｏｎｅｓｔ　不定式作目的状语.

大概这么几点，有些句子看了觉得有点别扭，但是说不上来原因。

以上只是个人见解。欢迎高手指教。