问题: 一个看图作文，图上内容是终点又是新起点，高手帮我看看，谢谢了
As can be seen from the drawing, a runner is rushing toward the end line. That line was right at the place, where he started running.
From this thought-provoking picture we can draw from an important lesson: Never be content with your achievements. An ambitious runner will well realize that his success is a starting point for a new race. On one hand, since lives are limited, we have to make use of the limited time to realize our potential values. On the other hand, we are born in a competitive society. In the face of the challenges, if we don’t keep peace with times, we’ll find ourselves outdated quite soon.
As far as I am concerned, I used to be a long-distance runner, when I was in high school. But now I could hardly maintain my records any more, for I have dropped the habit of jogging long before. Many people love to say, “if only I had my life to live over again…" it’s worthless to regret except for your new determination.
Provided your life plan has been set down, you should carry it through to the end. Once you carry it through to the end, you'll make it.
解答:
总体还是不错的。有几处行文稍加改动，供参考。
As can be seen from the drawing, a runner is rushing toward the ending line, and that is right where he started running.
From this thought-provoking picture we can draw an important lesson: Never be content with your achievements. An ambitious runner will well realize that his success is just a starting point for a new race. On one hand, since lives are limited, we have to make ful use of the limited time to realize our potential values. On the other hand, we are born in a competitive society. In the face of challenges, if we can't keep pace of the modern time, we’ll find ourselves outdated quite soon.
As far as I am concerned, I used to be a long-distance runner, when I was in high school. But now I could hardly maintain my records any more, for I have dropped the habit of jogging long before. Many people love to say, “if only I had my life to live over again…". It’s worthless regretting what you've missed, but go with your new determination.
Provided your life plan has been set down, you should carry it through to the end. Once you do like that, you'll make it.
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