问题: 演讲稿帮我纠错,谢谢
Every time the weekend comes, I told myself:"To get up as early as possible." But every time,I can not get up until 12 o’clock. Each time,I would find an excuse for the reason why I get up late, for example: I want get up early,but yesterday,I got to bed late because I watched a film.
This just an example,what I want to say is: haw many times we are going to do a good thing,and we say to ourself:’but’,so we give up.many times,the excuse we find is not smart,but we still give up because of laze or other reasons.It is this nasty little word that allows us to lie to ourselves and to severly limit ourselves without even knowing it. Such acts hinder the progress of our own opportunities, hinder the opportunity to help others, hinder the opportunities we learn from each other,and sometimes is also hinder the development of our company.for example: It is time to get off duty when a customer visits, We are concerned that we may not keep up with the end of the shuttle , so we say: I would like to help you, but the computer system does not work, you can come back tomorrow, ok? We always thought such a thing is the small things, but it has hindered our progress.
So ,what we should do? We have to overcome our lazy or concerns, when we encounter things, do not look for an excuse. We should be put our hearts in our work, then there will be pay off. As long as we persevere, that we will achieve an unexpected harvest.
解答:
第一段给你改了一下,可能是受自己的写作习惯影响改得比较多。后面部分如果改的话改动会稍多一些,因为我不太了解你要表达的实际含义,里面有些词应该是误用吧?建议你现在可以先多用已经学过的简单词汇,遇到不会写的词就换一种说法——这样也有助于英语思维的锻炼。最好不要用文曲星或者快译通之类的电子词典直接中文输入查询英文单词,很多这样查出来的英文单词并没有你真正想要表达的意思,例如你最后一段中的concerns常见的是担心、忧虑的意思,在此处似乎不太恰当。
Every time when the weekends come, I tell myself:"Get up as early as possible.(祈使句表示要求)" But every time,I can not get up until 12 o’clock. And everytime,I would find an excuse for my getting up late. For example,I may say: I wanted to get up early this morning, but the film I watched last night was so interesting that Iwent to bed too late.
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