The world has many people, they do something and do it well. They are fantastic! They all are star. It 's the same name of them.
I really admire them. And my favourite star is Bill Gates. He is very rich and he change the world. My father has some books about him. It talks about how can him rich. But most importantly, he is a kind man. He and his wife help a lot of people. He doesn't want to leave the money in the bank or for his family. He gives a lot of money for the poor or someone

我最喜爱的明星
世界上有很多人，他们做事情就会把它做好。他们很了不起。他们都是明星。他们拥有相同的名字。我真的敬佩他们。我最喜欢的明星是彼尔盖茨。他非常地富有，他改变了世界。我的父亲有些关于他的书。它讲述的是他是如何富裕起来的。但最重要的是，他是一个善良的人。他和他的妻子帮助了许多人。他不想把他的钱存在银行或者给他的家人。他给予了很多钱给穷人或某个人。