Xie Jun, who is the first woman chess champion from Asia, owes her succeed to her mother. In Xie Jun’s opinion, her mother’s respect for her own choice always helps her and lead to a unnormal life for herself.
Xie Jun appeared talent since she was a little girl. At the age of 12, she had a chance to choose between joining a chess team and going to cillege. Xie Jun’s mother talked with her little daughter and found she liked playing chess better. After thinking a lot, she decided to let Xie Jun join the chedd team which she always dreamt of. Because she believes that you will do a good deed in what you love and that interest is the best teacher.

请大家提提意见，改改错误， 这种作文在高考中能拿几分？

语法错误还是有几处的.至于几分,我不敢随便说.

(一)高考语文作文评分标准 

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　　1本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

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