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A Letter to My Parents



December 15th, 2001

Dear Dad,


How time flies! I have been in Wuhan University for over three months. This is the first time that I have been far away from home for a long time. I do want to talk to you about my school and my feelings.


Wuban University is a world-famous university which has a history of more than one hundred years and a population of more than 40 thousand. It is made up of four sections and covers all torts of subjects for bachelors, masters, doctors and so on. It is such a big organization of education that it can't be described clearly by me.


Wuhan University is at the foot of Luojia Hill and on the bank of East Lake. Its beautiful environment becomes the envy of others. With its champing views and talented students, Wuhan University is widely praised to be the heaven of science and culture and the cradle of the creation of top persons.


Since I became one of the members in Wuhan University, I have been very proud and happy. Our campus looks like a park. Every day I walk in it after meals, and feel comfortable and relaxed while appreciating the artistic picture of nature. It is my fortune to lead such a life.


I am majoring in engineering. That's a difficult but interesting course. I enjoy it a lot. The teachers are all knowledgeable and friendly. They try to finish the task of textbooks and make the whole class full of fun at the same time. They are patient and kind hearted enough. Whenever I ask them questions, they are pleased to answer them seriously and always encourage me to raise more questions. It seems to me that they are the most excellent teachers I have ever known. Undoubtedly, I'll succeed one day with their great help and my hard work.


Dad, maybe you still think that I'm a shy girl and dare not display myself on some occasions. However, it is not the case now. There are too many wonderful activities here. I often take part in competitions and parties. I have learned how to communicate with strangers and how to dance with boys. Furthermore, as a reporter in our college, I have benefited much from the experience in the interviews.


I'm used to living here now. I'm positive I'll get along well with both study and play here in the following four years.


New Year is round the corner. I hope you have a good time in the holiday!


With best wishes.
Xiaolin



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作者在该信中向父亲介绍了学校的历史、环境、课程设置等基本情况，同时也向父亲汇报了在学校的学习及生活情况。整篇丈章的布局基本符合书信写作的要求。层次分明，结构完整。



作者运用自然流畅的语言，变换多样的句式清楚地表达了思想。字里行间都充分显示了作者较强的遣词造句的能力。