问题: 大家帮我查查这篇作文里有错误吗？
没人给我改作文，只好求助这里的朋友了。大家帮我看看里面有错的地方吗？谢谢大家。
My plan for the coming Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming near. I don’t’ want spend more time on nothing. Therefore I map out a plan for study and sports.
First, I would like playing football with my friends in the mooring. Second, I would like to swimming in the weekend. Finally I plan to travel with my parents.
The knowledge is power. Therefore I am also plan to spend more time learning English. I have taken a schedule, which include words and oral for the plan. I believe it is useful for my English. I think I will have a good time in this summer.
解答:
相信我，下面的修改过的短文就可以了：
My plan for the coming Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming soon. I don't want to waste my time. Therefore I mapped out a plan for study and sports.
Firstly, I would like to play football with my friends in the morning. Secondly, I would like to swim on weekends. Finally I plan to travel with my parents.
Knowledge is power. Therefore I also plan to spend more time on learning English. I have made a schedule, which includes words study and oral English. I believe it is useful to my English. I think I will have a good time in this summer.
1.would like to play football……表示: 要踢球
2.I believe it is useful to my English
3。用firstly,secondly合适
4.therefore可以， 或用because or since 引出原因从句
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