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Confucius Institute

Confucius is a famous philosopher , thinker as well as education expert in ancient China. Nowadays,Confucius Institute is popular again and appears in the countries all over the
world. Fifty-four Confucius Institutes have
been built all over the world while another
fifty-six will be built by the end of this
year. It helps us develop the communication
with other countries and popularize our
Chinese culture of the language .
You can learn Chinese by using the
Internet. The service contains the providing
of large amount of Chinese books about
teaching , the training of Chinese teachers
and the introduction of the modern china in travelling trading , medical and some other
area .
Confucius Institute helps our culture to
be understood by the people around the world
and let everybode know that China is a great
country which is on the way to be the
greatest one .

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