问题: correct my grammar please.THank you!
Today is day of sharing. I don't know where to start .Well,I saw him this morning.Actually,I don't know him,I don't have any classes with him .But ,I know he is from HongKong.I remember meeting him at the bookstore in our school campus last semester.I can feel he likes me.Last semester he alway appeared near me .But ,I always avoided getting close with him,I don't know why.tell the truth,I like him too,but i don't know what i am afaid of .I have never talked with him not until at the beginning of this semester ,he let his cousin introduced him to me.I had just simply said Hi to him .After that he disappeared ,a week before the vilentines's day,He appeared in shool's parking lot ,but I didn't say anything because we were 10 feet away.I almost forget him,but this morning I saw him again,I think he saw me too.As last time ,our distance were very far.He turned his head then he used his hands went through his hair.His imaging is on my head all day .I am just too werid to fall in love with someone.maybe because i don't beleve in falling in love in the first signe.
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Today is the day of sharing. I don't know how to start .Well,I saw him this morning.Actually,I'm not familiar with him,I don't have any classes with him .But I know he is from HongKong.I remember meeting him at the bookstore in our school campus last semester.I feel that he likes me.Last semester he always approached to me .But I always avoided getting close to him,I don't know why.Tell the truth,I like him too,but i don't know what i am afaid. I have never talked with him not until at the beginning of this semester ,he let his cousin introduce him to me.I had just simply said Hi to him .After that he disappeared ,a week before the valentine's day,He appeared in shool's parking,but I didn't say anything because we were 10 feet away.I almost forget him,but this morning I saw him again,I think he find me too.As last time ,our distance were very far.He turned his head and smooth his hair.His imaging is in my mind all day long .I am just too werid to fall in love with someone.Maybe because i don't believe that falling in love in the first signe.
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