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About 3000 people assembled in the mosque surrounds, attended an elegiacal convocation for commemorating their hero. John lhan,who died of a suspected heart attack, only 42 years old. People respected him very much because he had a lot of fantastic personalities and some great stories. People recalled Ilhan’s many facets (canny businessman, migrant success story, devoted family man, generous benefactor.) At the meeting ,a business man recounted the story which was related with Ilhan and described his venture. The Turkish community farewell to a Ilhan before the meeting, they used generous, helpful and humble to described him. Hence, people dressed the especial clothing and attended the meeting so that they respected him very much. Some famous people and his relations attended this meeting together. Ilhan’s wife will remember his songs, and some beautiful experiences.


我语法不好,请指出我的语法错误和改正方法,和不太合理的地方,谢谢

解答:

1.attended----attending
2.died of----died from
7.related with----related to
8.farewell to----farewelled to
9. the especial clothing----the special clothing
10.remember----memorize