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The article refers to the World Cancer Research Fund’s report about the food and cancer. People can get a lot of information from this article, including what food can prevent the cancer and what food can lead to cancer.

Recently, many people and media concentrate on food problem, especially the relationship between food and cancer, not only in some developed countries, but also in some developing areas. Hence, this article is very important to people’s life. Also, that is why I choose this article for my reading journal.

Obviously, people could get a lot of useful information from the article .Maybe some readers would change their habits of diet. It will help to improve people’s health. I agree with the WCRF’ view, because health is most important for each person.

Although many people lack of the healthy awareness,however,the government and media focus their attention to explain to people this problem like this article,though, with the passage of time, it will surely produce more profound significance.