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The people around me think that environmental protection is very important too, but they do not put in action, for example, or people will refuse any chaos, and I think that did not fundamentally awareness of environmental protection. Environmental issues on trade and the impact of foreign investments particularly conspicuous. How to properly handle the relationship between the environment and development, and take a sustainable path to the outside world, the Northwest economy every worker has to be a thought. Human concern for the environment is an indisputable fact.




I like travelling alone Traveling alone is a confidence builder as well. Thomas Jefferson once said: "One travels more usefully when alone because he reflects more."It's true: you have abundant time for contemplating, even vegetating, or anything you want. Independent travel, a person, a shadow. Such travel, any joyful has not been possible saying that and for two year not any change. A person, a package, stops from time to time, not the familiar stopover station, the strange crowd, ten several hours does not have the language silently. I am because only a person, a little lonely travel, will have the faint trace loneliness. Is already familiar with, in the ice-cold midnight or the extremely hot afternoon, sits in the waiting room, either is taking a book, either is nipping appears as a result of the fatigue of travel no longer the delicacy bread, looks that comes and goes hurried and the indifferent crowd, sometimes will imagine someone's story, he and she, will also have them! Sometimes the such tasteless travel lets me think the fear! Sometimes even likes a person, because time are many, only needs to manage well you, a peaceful group scenery, does not need too many spoken languages. Feels selfishly own indifferent, to friend, to others, even to oneself! Has not seen somebody off reluctant to part brothers, do not have a group colleague's friend. Will not think sad, because of own choice!


I think that the quiz is the most likely to form a concern, question-and-answer articles often bring the greatest hits, I have an example is the above-mentioned "what stocks to buy most profitable." In this article I clicked on the Sina blog has nearly 60,000 (and the current stock of course has a direct relationship, but I do not think ahead, "attractive", my sentiment is not the number of people of concern).

The reason behind this is very simple: effective learning fourth secret is in the exchange of learning. We and teachers exchanges, and students exchanges, and exchanges colleagues, we have a common interest and people exchanges, and subordinates exchange, we and the exchange of children. We have had frequent exchanges and its own: we ask ourselves, we ask ourselves answered.

试着改的通顺些:

第一段,2行:TOO 省去;OR 省去;WILL 改MAY
3行:加 THEY;DID 改 DO I think that THEY DO not ...
5行: 加 ARE,investments ARE particularly conspicuous
7行: every 上移, the every Northwest economy worker ..

第二段

1行: 加逗点,I like travelling alone ,
1行:去as well.
5行:any joyful has not been possible saying that and for two year not any change.实在不通,但也不知道他想表达什么,干脆去掉.变成:Independent travel, a person, a shadow, a package,...

7行:ten several hours does not have the language silently 改为 ten several hours silently without the language

8行:改为:because I am only a person, a little lonely travel,I Will have the faint trace .
待续