A page from a student’s diary
There were no classes this afternoon. My classmates all went to People’s park . They had a good time , but I didn’t go . after lunch Aunt Huang came in and she looked worried. Grandma is ill, she said. I must take her to hospital. But my baby…I can’t leave her by herself. Mum and Dad were not at home . So I said , Don’t worry . I can look after her .
Thank you , Xiao Feng. Then she left the baby was about ten months old at first she was asleep. Half an hour later she woke up and began to cry . Don’t cry , I said I talked to her But she looked at me and cried harder and harder. I turned on the radio. She stopped crying and listened to the music after a few minutes she started to cry again. Listen to me , I said I started to sing. The baby watched and listened , and she didn’t cry any more. Then I made faces and jumped like a monkey . the baby laughed and laughed.
All that afternoon I jumped and sang and did all kinds of things.When Aunt Huang came back , I was so tired. In the evening Liu Ming came to see me . I told him the whole story. He laughed. You’re great! I’m going to tell everyone Bring your babies to Ling Feng He can take good care of your babies.

一个学生的日记的一页

今天下午没课。我的同学都去人民公园了。他们都很高兴，但我没去。午餐后，黄阿姨来了而且看起来很焦虑。奶奶病了，她说。我要送她去医院。但我的宝宝...我不能把她一个人留下。爸爸妈妈不在家。所以我说，不要担心。我可以照顾她。

谢谢你，肖峰。然后她离开了约十个月的女孩，开始的时候他睡着了。半小时后她醒了，并开始哭了起来。不要哭，我对她说，但她看着我哭得更历害了。我打开收音机，她不哭了，开始听音乐，几分钟后，她又开始哭了。听我唱，我说着便唱起歌。小女孩看着听着，她不再哭了。然后我做鬼脸并像个猴子跳跃。婴儿笑了又笑。

所有这天下午，我就跳啊唱啊，做所有能做的事情。黄阿姨回来后，我已经非常疲倦了。在傍晚刘明来见我。我告诉他整个故事。他笑了起来，您真伟大！我要告诉大家，把你的婴儿带给Ling Feng,他能照顾好你的婴儿。





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