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请老师帮我修改一下这篇作文。谢谢~~~
你的一名网友因为迷恋网络,以致学习成绩退步。给他写封信,谈谈你的看法和建议。
收件人:Peter
发件人:Lin Hua
时间:2007年6月8日
Dear Peter June.8.2007
When I was hearing that you are addicted to the Internet games. I was very sad .Why? Because of we are friends who meet in the Internet.
I don’t think play computer games is worry .We need have a good rest after study for a long time. But I don’t think spend a lot of time on playing computer games is right too!
As you know the university exam is coming now. We have to spend much more time on our study. Then we can go to the school, which we want to go. If we don’t do like that. We will be fail, like you. While. Don’t be worry. I believe, If you work hard from now on you can catch with your classmates! What do you think of my advice?
Looking forward to your letter!
Yours, Lin Hua

解答:

1) I was told that you have been addicted to... be tol d ( 有人告诉我,听说 )
2) because we are good friends who knew each other on the Internet.
3) playing computer games is worrying
4) we need to have
5) I don't think it right to spend a lot time on playing computer games.
6) then we can go to the school where we really must go.
7) If we don't like school . we will fail...
8) Don't worry
9) you can catch up with ....

说明: school 并不是“学校”的意思。此地意思是“学习”