December 12 Wednesday Fine
Today,we had a successful class meeting.the thame of which was'I love my country'.
During the meeting,there were eight students gave speaches,The main idea of the speaches was singing songs for the great,powerful country,the happiness of her people,and the rich,harmoniously life.What's more,they also showed the ditermination that they would work hard so they can make more contrubutions to our country.
The meeting lasted for half an hour.According to it,I not only knew more about our great country but also depressed the love for her.
How big encouragce it is for me!I sweared to be an honor of our country!~

30分满分，可以得多少　帮忙修改下谢谢

得分：19
1。格式不对。天气应右上角。
2.Today,we had a successful class meeting.the thame of which was'I love my country'.
was后加that.表语从句that不能省。
3.During the meeting,there were eight students gave speaches,
gave改为gaving.因为there be句型有谓语be了。且","改为“。”，因为“，”不能并列简单句，要用连词，后为简单句。
4.harmoniously life
副词误用harmoniously改为harmonious
5.What's more,they also showed the ditermination that they would work hard so they can make more contrubutions to our country.
so后少that
contrubution不可数
6.How big encouragce it is for me!
改为What a big encouragement it is for me!
7.According to it,I not only knew more about our great country but also depressed the love for her.
.According to it不妥
总之，小错误不少（都是严重的错误，如1，3，4，6，），基本功一般，写作意识还不错，汉式思维还存在（如7.），所以只能得及格档的分19吧。