本人英语不好，应该有一些语法错误，大家帮忙挑挑，还有英语作文需要注意什莫？

This is an automatic electric oven, It is used by billions of families in the world. The most important reason that people choice that is it can bake delicious food and save your time.
A normal automatic electric oven should be contain four parts. One is oven body, other is handle, other is grill, the other is oven plate.
When you want to bake a cake by automatic electric oven, you need following those step: first, you need to check your oven’s condition, if every part is fine, you can put cake on oven plate and put them into oven body carefully, second you need grill, it can avoid rack and upper heater touch your cake, so put your grill between rack and upper heater, third, if you make sure you had done all of the following step, close the oven’s door.
Now, you need to setup Temperature control dial and cooking time dial correctly, you may find some help in you oven manual book, and then if you see upper heater’s color become red or the oven become hot, that means your oven is working, you also can see your cake though finder and that ‘s all you need to do.
When the time is up, you need use handle bring cake out, because oven is hot in this time.
Only some simple step you also can make a delicious cake , it’s nice isn't?

This is an automatic electric oven, which is being used by billions of families in the world. The most important reason for people choice is that it can bake delicious food and save your time.
A normal automatic electric oven should consist of four parts,an oven body, a handle, a grill and an oven plate.
When wanting to bake a cake in the automatic electric oven, you need to follow these steps: first, you need to check your oven’s condition. If every part is fine, you can put the cake on the oven plate and then put them in the oven carefully. Second, you need a grill, which can avoid the rack and the upper heater touching your cake, and put your grill between the rack and the upper heater. Third, if you make sure you have followed all of the above steps, close the oven’s door.
Now, you need to set up the temperature control dial and the cooking time dial correctly with the directions in your oven manual book, and then when you see the upper heater’s color become red or the oven become hot, that shows your oven is working. Still you can see your cake through the finder. What has been mentioned above is all you need to do
When the baking time is up, you must use the handle to bring your cake out, because the oven is too hot at the moment.
Only with these simple steps can you make a delicious cake. It’s so nice, isn't it?
I WISH MY CORRECTINGS ARE OF HELP TO YOU.