以“朋友”为主题写一篇作文。该文必须包含下列内容：
1. 你生活中所看到或所经历的一段交友故事：
2. 该故事对你产生的影响及你的想法。
Everyone has friends.Friends consist of our beautiful life.
Mike is a friend of mine.Not only he has a healthy body but also he studys very hard.
Do you know how we are known?
Let me to told you.
In a chance,my class & Mike’s class were doing a English test in language lab.
Suddenly,my auto pencil can’t use.I feel upset.Because I can’t finish the test.In this time,Mike helped me.He gave me a pencil.Make me finished the test successful.
After test,we introduced ourself each other.
Now,we are friends.
As I am a child,my English score was poor.Now,it still poor.I asked him,how can I study English well?
He said to me study English well you must listen carefully in lessons and after lessons you’d better review the notes.But exercise is very important too.It spent him a lot of time from night to midnight.
I thinks he is hard.Now,he is my model.
Now,I am study English hard,too.I believe,I will like him in fature time.
In my opinions,China joined WTO.English is our second language.So,we should study it hard.But I think Mike’s action is unnecessary.If everyone study English or do exercise until midnight.So that we can’t receive enough rest.
At the end of writing,I think:study English well must use correct way and make friend is very important in our life.

Friends consist of our beautiful life这句翻译成中文是：朋友是由我们的美好生活组成的，是错误的。建议改为：Friends constitute our beautiful life.或者Friends are an important part of our beautiful life.(朋友是我们美好生活的重要部分)
Not only he has a healthy body but also he studys very hard.语序不对，建议改为 he not only has a healthy body but also studies very hard或者Not only does he have a healthy body but also studies very hard.
Do you know how we are known?本句意思是：你知道我们是如何出名的吗？ 建议改为：Do you how we got to know each other?
Let me to told you. 是典型错误，建议改为：Let me tell you.
In a chance,my class & Mike’s class were doing a English test in language lab有误，建议改为：
Once my class & Mike’s class were doing an English test in language lab.
Suddenly,my auto pencil can’t use.I feel upset.Because I can’t finish the test.In this time,Mike helped me.He gave me a pencil.Make me finished the test successful错误很多，建议改为：
Suddenly,my auto pencil could not be used.I felt upset for I could finish the test.Just at the moment,Mike helped me.He gave me a pencil and thus helped me finish the test successful.
As I am a child,my English score was poor.Now,it still poor.I asked him,how can I study English well? 应改为：when i was a child my english was poor and now it is still poor.I asked him about how i could learn english well.
后一部分He said to me study English well you must listen carefully in lessons and after lessons you’d better review the notes.But exercise is very important too.It spent him a lot of time from night to midnight.
I thinks he is hard.Now,he is my model.
Now,I am study English hard,too.I believe,I will like him in fature time.
In my opinions,China joined WTO.English is our second language.So,we should study it hard.But I think Mike’s action is unnecessary.If everyone study English or do exercise until midnight.So that we can’t receive enough rest.
At the end of writing,I think:study English well must use correct way and make friend is very important in our life. 错误也较多，建议修改如下：

He told me that,in order to learn English well i must listen carefully in class and after class you’d better review the notes.And at the same time exercises are very important too.English study takes him a lot of time from early evening to midnight every day.
I think he studies hard.Now,he is my model and I study English hard,too.I believe I will be like him in fature.
In my opinion,now that China has joined WTO,English has become our second language.So we should study it hard.Yet I do not think Mike’s action is necessary.If everyone studies English or do exercises until midnight he can’t take enough rest.
At last I think we must use correct methods to learn English well and it is very important to make friends in our life.