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I had a bad day
I had a bad day today. first in morning I forgot my homework.it was terrible! then I missde the bus ,next I droppde my keys. finally Ihur my knee.the day is very terrible day!
What a terrible day!

解答:

I had a bad day
I had a bad day today.
First in 加上 the morning I forgot改成left 因为东西忘在哪里用leave my homework.
it was terrible! Then 先说 next 在说then.你把他们掉各个。 I missed the bus ,and nex----then I dropped my keys. Finally I hur--hurt my knee.the day is very terrible day! 去掉这一句,和下文重复。
What a terrible day!

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