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08奥运
百年奥运,今夜无眠。8月14日凌晨,我们全家一同观看了梦幻般的奥运会开幕式,真是太美了。在开幕式上我看到了西方文明的起源地--希腊美妙的景色,来自世界各国的运动健儿在此风云际会。更让我兴奋的是,当我们中国代表团入场时,姚明那高大的身躯,高举着我们的五星红旗,我感到了我们中华民族的强健与伟岸。
2001年7月13日,对于中华民族来说是永远不能忘记的日子。当萨马兰奇老人站在话筒前,当那一声清脆的“北京”响起的时刻,是我们中国人最骄傲的一刻。我们首都北京的申奥成功,有人可能并不知道申奥对于一个国家来说是如此的重要,申奥成功象征着一个国家的富饶与强大,在国际上社会地位的提高!
记得在xxx年雅典奥运会上,中国体育代表团在本届奥运上最终获得32枚金牌,取得历史上最好的成绩,名列金牌榜第二位,让五星红旗一次次的升起,使我们从此跨上体育强国的行列。
这是一个盛大的节日,全世界都在沸腾
奥运是什么?在我的眼里,它是一场没有硝烟的战场。人类之间的战争,就其本质目的来说,并不在于屠杀,而在于使敌方屈服,这一点,在奥运会上得以充分实现。人类作为一种高级动物,本来就有着协作与好战的双重属性,否则,世界上就不会有那么多的战争。但愿奥运能成为人类竟争与好胜的最终战场,而使真正的血腥战争得以消亡。
奥运是人类体能的博览会。似海豚,奥运会上有着那么多优美的泳姿;似猎豹,百米冲刺风驰电掣;似雄鹰,体操、跳水志在长空。美中不足的是,人类最大的潜能---发明、制造与利用工具的能力未能成为奥运会的竞技项目。
奥运是一个舞台,展现着力量、意志、技巧和自然的美,以及生理上的极限,赢得了数以亿记观众的青睐。人们为胜利所鼓舞,为失误而遗憾,为参与而自豪。每一枚奖牌,其份量均超过奥斯卡、金熊的奖杯。
奥运是人生的缩影。冠军是幸运的,在通往冠军的金字塔下,多少无名英雄为之而奋力攀登;冠军是短暂的,今日的冠军,明日可能名落孙山;冠军是相对的,某一项目的冠军,在其它方面很有可能是低能儿;冠军是荣耀的,但在他高唱国歌、热泪盈眶之时,想到的并不是未来怎样辉煌,而是回想到了数年来伤病的困扰和艰苦的训练;冠军是可贵的,在他的身上,有着多少不屈不挠、挑战自我、勇攀高峰的精神。
奥运是人类的圣会。除了它,人类的哪一项社会活动能在如此公正、详和、欢庆的气氛中进行!我祝愿奥运精神永驻人间,给世界带来和平、带来欢乐、带来繁荣、带来希望。
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08 Olympics
Olympic 100 years, no sleep tonight. August 14 morning, we watched a family with a fantastic opening ceremony of the Olympic Games, is really beautiful. At the opening ceremony, I saw the origin of Western civilization - Greece beautiful scenery from all over the world athletes in this situation would be the occasion. What I am heartened by is that when we Chinese delegation admission, the tall Yao Ming of the body, hold high our five-star red flag, I feel we have a strong and Wei-an of the Chinese nation.
July 13, 2001, the Chinese people will never forget that day. When Samaranch elderly microphone stand ago, when it一声burst of the "Beijing" sounded the moment, China is the most proud moment. We capital of Beijing's successful Olympic bid, it may not bid for a country that is so important, a symbol of a successful bid the rich and powerful countries in the international community on the advancement of!
Xxx remember that in the Olympic Games in Athens, Chinese sports delegation at the Olympic Games in the final 32 gold medals and achieved the best results in history, ranked second in the gold medal list, the five-star red flag was raised, Since then we enter the ranks of sports power.
This is a grand festival, the world is boiling
What is the Olympics? In my eyes, it is a battlefield without smoke. War between the human, by its nature, purpose, does not lie in the massacre, but because the enemy yield, which, at the Olympic Games to be fully realized. As a senior human animals, already has a collaboration with the dual attributes militant Otherwise, the world would not have so much war. It is hoped that the Olympic Games will become a competitive and the ultimate battlefield Victory due to the bloody war to the real demise.
Olympic Games is the human body of the Expo. Like dolphins, the Olympic Games have so many beautiful Yongzi; like cheetah, the 100-meter sprint drill; like the Eagle, gymnastics, diving-in the sky. The fly in the ointment is that the greatest potential - the invention, manufacturing, and the ability to use tools failed to become Olympic sports projects.
The Olympics is a stage show of strength, will, skills and natural beauty, as well as the physical limit, to win a few million viewers in mind of all ages. People are encouraged by the victory, and regret for the mistakes, and proud to participate in the. Each one medal, its weight exceeded Oscar, the Golden Bear trophy.
The Olympics is the epitome of life. Champion is lucky, in the championship to the pyramid, how many unsung heroes who can strive climbing; champion was short, today's champion, tomorrow may be relaxed; champion is relative, a project champion, is in the other Infants may be low; championship glory, but in his singing the national anthem, tears when thinking of the future is not how brilliant, but a few years Huixiangdao injury problems and the difficult training champion is commendable. In his possession, a number of perseverance and challenge themselves, scaled new heights spirit.
St. Olympics is a human would. Apart from it, which a human social activities in such a fair, detailed and, in an atmosphere of celebration! I wish the Olympic spirit Yongzhu the world, to bring peace to the world, bringing joy, and bring prosperity and hope.
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August 14 morning, we watched a family with a fantastic opening ceremony of the Olympic Games, is really beautiful.你的句子基本上结构都是错误的!像这个句子。时间前没介词!一个句子有两个谓语!
On the morning of Aug.14,the whole family watched the fantastic opening ceremony of the Olympic Games that was extremely beautiful.
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