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Time goes by too slowly to be recognized after being graduated from school. It's amazing to be alive through these years being alone without friends, parties and communication. It seems to be noting difficult to enjoy limited pleasure and to suffer all the sadness just by oneself.
Life is different to everybody, maybe it's wonderful to someone, but obviously I'm not the lucky dog. Sometimes I get really struggled by some questions like why it's just me? I can't do nothing else but to keep my life at the wheel. No changes, and no more new hurt, that’s all I want.
I've never thought about being strongly touched by a movie. "How can we still be alive without love?" I listened to the little boy that I couldn't hold myself to lose all my defense and finally burst out into a desperation. All dreams promised by myself were knocked down ruthlessly and I cannot help but to confess what I did to deceive myself as well as others.
luckily those blue days are finally past. We can't be alive without love, but I get to know that love is hidden deeply in my soul. All those joy and sadness are cause by the love, and the love never disappear. Someone told me that he regards love as a luxury that try to cherish it when you are enjoying and try to be calm and hopeful when you are waiting. Because we know that love will never die, where there is love, there is hope.
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Time goes by too slowly to be realized after graduated from school. It's amazing to be alive through these years being alone without friends, parties or communication. It seems to be noting difficult to enjoy limited pleasure and to suffer all the sadness just by myself.
Life is different to everybody. Maybe it's wonderful to someone, but obviously I'm not the lucky dog. Sometimes I get really struggled by some questions like why it's just me? I can do nothing else but keep my life at/on? the wheel. No changes and no more new hurt, that’s all I want.
I've never thought about being strongly touched by a movie. "How can we still be alive without love?" I listened to the little boy and then I couldn't hold myself losing all my defense and finally burst out into a desperation. All dreams promised by myself were knocked down ruthlessly and I could not help but confess what I did to deceive myself as well as others.
luckily those blue days finally passed. We can't be alive without love, but I get to know that love is hidden deeply in my soul. All those joy and sadness are caused by the love, and the love will never disappear. Someone told me that he regarded love as a luxury that you tried to cherish it when you were enjoying and tried to be calm and hopeful when you were waiting. Because we know that love will never die, where there is love, there is hope.
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